Term 4 week 1 Writing life or fall?

Walt:Use our senses to write a description.

 for writing we have this photo (scroll down to see) and we have to imagine what is happening to this girl!

        Life Or fall? (choose)

I was having a late night stroll, and suddenly, I tripped and fell. 

I tried to hold onto what looked like, book Shelves?

It could barely hold me, and fell, the whole book shelf fell

On top of me and the books bashed my torso.

I slowly came to a stop, in mid-air. I knew that beforelong I would fall again, so 

I quickly looked around and felt claustraphobic when I realised how small the hole was. While I was falling it looked like the library tunnel was getting smaller

And smaller. The books started to get closer to my feet. sometimes after the

Books started to click and clater upon my feet.

A bit after I heard rocks on top of me caving up, this time I just knew I would d!e 

In this library tunnel. I accepted my faith at that point. I shut my mouth and saw the blue dress I was wearing flutter and flutter. I then had some faith and opened my mouth.. But instead dust flew right into my mouth. 

As I screamed to hopefully get the dust out of my mouth, I saw a giant-

or massive tarantula! I screamed even louder, until…

That trantruala said “I’ll get you out, in return. You give me a little something…”

“Alright!”

“Give me choc-” c

“Wake up Alice.”

“What?”

“Your going to be late!”

I got up and started eating breakfast and left. Until.. I fell into the same library

                                    (*o*)

my title is 'life or fall' 

I really enjoyed my writing and im really proud of my describtion,

I think i could of added a little bit more describtion,

but im still very proud of it.

I have a screen-shot for all of you!

I hope you like my writing if you have any comments, let me know!